tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post5246437725241698552..comments2023-10-02T04:00:28.256-04:00Comments on karen Y. bynum: That moment when a demon's been feeding on you... RUNNING FROM SHADOWS #8Sunday #YAPNR Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08920349957061612653noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-30037428024776604172014-06-23T10:41:41.056-04:002014-06-23T10:41:41.056-04:00I can just picture her lying back trying to rest.....I can just picture her lying back trying to rest...and it just not happening!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-31721806137063236202014-06-22T22:04:01.528-04:002014-06-22T22:04:01.528-04:00Great excerpt :) I was drawn right into her though...Great excerpt :) I was drawn right into her thoughts and dilema. Looking forward to more of this tale. Elisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12567420139472596391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-65195284817868225052014-06-22T15:41:00.700-04:002014-06-22T15:41:00.700-04:00If she can believe Pax.If she can believe Pax.Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-80292890640799181242014-06-22T14:50:15.846-04:002014-06-22T14:50:15.846-04:00Given the supernatural things going on, I am not s...Given the supernatural things going on, I am not sure whether the leering shadow is metaphorical, an optical illusion (it looked like it was leering, but was really just an ordinary shadow), or...it has a life of its own and really was leering. That's the trouble with snippets out of context. I'm leaning towards the latter, in which case...CREEPY! Well done.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-51803516668803231642014-06-22T13:59:50.874-04:002014-06-22T13:59:50.874-04:00McWitches? Hah!
Nice thought spiral keeping her a...McWitches? Hah!<br /><br />Nice thought spiral keeping her awake. It's so hard to stop worrying about some things--even though you know worry doesn't help.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-67292537095714383962014-06-22T13:07:20.080-04:002014-06-22T13:07:20.080-04:00Great job on character's POV. Got a good sense...Great job on character's POV. Got a good sense of her struggles. Lorien Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299242632625658988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-48063946205329145572014-06-22T11:32:41.642-04:002014-06-22T11:32:41.642-04:00Great snippet!! I love the emotion and all of her ...Great snippet!! I love the emotion and all of her questions--very gripping. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16962606252287502975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-13703672488135962222014-06-22T10:51:05.890-04:002014-06-22T10:51:05.890-04:00Yessss, good question, why her? I'm glad to se...Yessss, good question, why her? I'm glad to see she's trying to think it all through and I bet interesting developments await. Excellent snippet! (But I'm still missing Pax...)Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.com