tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post4623814863962029685..comments2023-10-02T04:00:28.256-04:00Comments on karen Y. bynum: Now she has to face... Her. Mother. Eek! RUNNING FROM SHADOWS #8Sunday #YAPNR #unicornsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08920349957061612653noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-49922154819566498312014-02-04T17:15:38.313-05:002014-02-04T17:15:38.313-05:00"her cold hands making me shiver again."..."her cold hands making me shiver again." gave me a bit of the shivers. NIce touch.Smu Doodlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14709677949920355173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-38081905472089890982014-02-03T21:09:14.185-05:002014-02-03T21:09:14.185-05:00Having Aunt Lil open the door does nothing to decr...Having Aunt Lil open the door does nothing to decrease the tension, just prolongs it as we're still wondering what'll happen when Mom appears. Good excerpt!E.D. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06919218250424892502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-23839424073509508092014-02-03T02:05:06.029-05:002014-02-03T02:05:06.029-05:00Relief comes first, then a scolding proportional t...Relief comes first, then a scolding proportional to how much worry you put the parent/parent figure through. She's about to get a monster of a lecture, I bet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-77137011507703140802014-02-03T00:12:58.373-05:002014-02-03T00:12:58.373-05:00I love seeing when writer's remember to add th...I love seeing when writer's remember to add the real human elements to their stories. Relief is the first emotion but just wait til mom gets a hold of her, and then there is the fiance'. I may possibly have wanted to face the demon before a pissed off mom. :) Another great snippet.<br /><a href="http://historysleuth.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">The Murders of Polly Frisch</a>HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-65359476445173349482014-02-03T00:07:27.299-05:002014-02-03T00:07:27.299-05:00Will Aunt Lil keep her from getting her ass chewed...Will Aunt Lil keep her from getting her ass chewed out? Looking forward to finding out! : )Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-59845661706115367572014-02-02T21:02:43.546-05:002014-02-02T21:02:43.546-05:00Awe, thank heaven for aunt Lil!! Not what she expe...Awe, thank heaven for aunt Lil!! Not what she expected when the door flew open. Wonder what she'll tell them now?? Good 8!!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-89784839915993663312014-02-02T18:23:55.712-05:002014-02-02T18:23:55.712-05:00So where's mother?So where's mother?Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-42030036336218574662014-02-02T14:27:19.742-05:002014-02-02T14:27:19.742-05:00I love the detail with the wind chimes. Compelling...I love the detail with the wind chimes. Compelling snippet.Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-79370721522165236492014-02-02T12:30:58.607-05:002014-02-02T12:30:58.607-05:00Wow, awesome tension. He's a unicorn?? Love i...Wow, awesome tension. He's a unicorn?? Love it!Alexis Duranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15582838606796213690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-87311056440542345422014-02-02T11:32:32.408-05:002014-02-02T11:32:32.408-05:00Face her. that was a great line and well executed....Face her. that was a great line and well executed.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11559515581305568500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-80358925418397079702014-02-02T11:15:36.402-05:002014-02-02T11:15:36.402-05:00Well Aunt Lil is certainly an interesting new char...Well Aunt Lil is certainly an interesting new character in all of this...interesting snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2720721030970850341.post-81423061202571952532014-02-02T09:27:51.422-05:002014-02-02T09:27:51.422-05:00I thank the Goddess as well. Good eight. All the f...I thank the Goddess as well. Good eight. All the foreboding gone? I doubt it.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.com